Post by InvaderZaTr on Jun 22, 2009 18:31:22 GMT -5
Ello mates! Ok, I've noticed that NOBODY is interested in my edited story of Zim's Birthday. So I have created a new story called Zim's Comic. Now, I know it is short, but its just like a little mini episode like The Most Horrible Short Ever. Anyway, here it is:
Zim's Comic by: InvaderZaTr
INT. Miss Bitters’ Classroom
Miss Bitters: And there were no survivors. Now children-
Miss Bitters gets cut off by a man walking in. And that man happens to be the cameo for Jhonen Vasquez.
Miss Bitters: Oh, yes. This week, you horrible children are going to write a script for this man. The winner will have their script turned into a comic and receive a certificate from the mayor.
Zim (to himself)- Hm, if I could win this contest, I could meet the mayor. And once I meet the mayor, I could brain wash him into telling everyone how they must bow down to Zim!
Zim begins to laugh evilly while everyone stares at him
Zim: (cough)
Dib- Zim? You? Write a script? Ha! I’d like to see that!
Zim- Oh, you’ll see, Dib! You’ll all see!
Cameo: I’ll see you all next week.
The school bell rings. All the children leave.
INT. Zim’s Lab
Zim has a pencil and paper in front of him and he is trying to come up with an idea. Gir walks in carrying a mud pie.
Gir: YOU WANT SOME PIE, MASTA!!
Zim- No, Gir. I want an idea for my script!
Gir- HOW ‘BOUT A STORY ABOUT MUD PIES!!
Zim- GIR! LEAVE MY PRESENCE AT ONCE! You’re distracting me!
Gir walks away.
Zim- How can this be so hard! I just need to- I’VE GOT IT!
Zim begins to write a story with a title ‘The Almighty Miz and His Almighty Mission’
Zim (reading what he is writing): Once there was a normal human boy named Miz. He was assigned to a secret mission by his leaders to go conquer a filthy planet called HTRAE, which stands for Miz Is Awesome. He was also given an advanced robot that he didn’t need at all because he was Almighty and Awesome…
INT. One week later
Zim is holding up his story one morning and saying things to himself like “I am Zim!” and “I will rule all!”.
INT. Miss Bitters’ Classroom
Miss Bitters open a door and the cameo Jhonen walks in.
Cameo: I have all the results in, dear children! And the winner is… The Almighty Miz and His Almighty Mission.
Zim- YES! YOU WILL ALL BOW TO ZIM!!
Cameo- But that story wasn’t in script format.
The cameo tosses the story in the trash.
Cameo- So the winner is… Melvin’s Trip to the Doctor!
Dib- Melvin’s Trip to the Doctor? What about mine?
Cameo- Oh, you mean the one about the alien that came to Earth to conquer it? That was the most horrible thing I’ve ever read in my life! I had to stop half-way through it!
Melvin- YAY!!
Zim- NOOOOOO!!!!!
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Ok, that's it. Some parts kinda sucked, but they were only little things. So...yea...byez.
PLHE,
InvaderZaTr
Zim's Comic by: InvaderZaTr
INT. Miss Bitters’ Classroom
Miss Bitters: And there were no survivors. Now children-
Miss Bitters gets cut off by a man walking in. And that man happens to be the cameo for Jhonen Vasquez.
Miss Bitters: Oh, yes. This week, you horrible children are going to write a script for this man. The winner will have their script turned into a comic and receive a certificate from the mayor.
Zim (to himself)- Hm, if I could win this contest, I could meet the mayor. And once I meet the mayor, I could brain wash him into telling everyone how they must bow down to Zim!
Zim begins to laugh evilly while everyone stares at him
Zim: (cough)
Dib- Zim? You? Write a script? Ha! I’d like to see that!
Zim- Oh, you’ll see, Dib! You’ll all see!
Cameo: I’ll see you all next week.
The school bell rings. All the children leave.
INT. Zim’s Lab
Zim has a pencil and paper in front of him and he is trying to come up with an idea. Gir walks in carrying a mud pie.
Gir: YOU WANT SOME PIE, MASTA!!
Zim- No, Gir. I want an idea for my script!
Gir- HOW ‘BOUT A STORY ABOUT MUD PIES!!
Zim- GIR! LEAVE MY PRESENCE AT ONCE! You’re distracting me!
Gir walks away.
Zim- How can this be so hard! I just need to- I’VE GOT IT!
Zim begins to write a story with a title ‘The Almighty Miz and His Almighty Mission’
Zim (reading what he is writing): Once there was a normal human boy named Miz. He was assigned to a secret mission by his leaders to go conquer a filthy planet called HTRAE, which stands for Miz Is Awesome. He was also given an advanced robot that he didn’t need at all because he was Almighty and Awesome…
INT. One week later
Zim is holding up his story one morning and saying things to himself like “I am Zim!” and “I will rule all!”.
INT. Miss Bitters’ Classroom
Miss Bitters open a door and the cameo Jhonen walks in.
Cameo: I have all the results in, dear children! And the winner is… The Almighty Miz and His Almighty Mission.
Zim- YES! YOU WILL ALL BOW TO ZIM!!
Cameo- But that story wasn’t in script format.
The cameo tosses the story in the trash.
Cameo- So the winner is… Melvin’s Trip to the Doctor!
Dib- Melvin’s Trip to the Doctor? What about mine?
Cameo- Oh, you mean the one about the alien that came to Earth to conquer it? That was the most horrible thing I’ve ever read in my life! I had to stop half-way through it!
Melvin- YAY!!
Zim- NOOOOOO!!!!!
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Ok, that's it. Some parts kinda sucked, but they were only little things. So...yea...byez.
PLHE,
InvaderZaTr